The Little Spirit
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The domestic help’s daughter Chutki was
not a very tidy girl, though with a pair of beautiful fish shaped eyes and a
facial contour akin to a goddess. Her parents had migrated from the foothills
of the great Himalayas in Nepal in search of a better livelihood all the way to
south India, Bengaluru, almost a year ago.
Both, the father and the mother of Chutki
worked very hard for their only child’s better future. Besides they also sent a
good portion of their hard earned money back home in Nepal to support their
parents and their dependents, of the latter, to put it utmost euphemistically, though
grown up siblings found the frugality of the village life far more bearable
than the unpredictability and hardships of the distant land. And didn’t mind
living on other’s money, rather to a few of them it seemed to be their right.
All of this left little time for Chutki’s
parents to spend time caring for her. She accompanied her mother to the
latter’s duties as a domestic help to different households since her father was
out on his duty as a security guard to the nearby Information Technology
Special Economic Zone. Her father was at home during the daytime, only on
Sunday’s. And little Chutki did then stay back with her father at their single
room concrete yet sans window shanty inside the apartment’s premises while her
mother was away working.
In the absence of a proper care and
hygiene at home Chutki did fall sick quite often. So much so that she had scars
left by healed boils all over her limbs. This gave the beautiful little girl an
unpleasant appearance although her innocent smile made up for what the scars
took away.
One of the households she used to
frequent with her mother inside the apartment complex and also enjoyed the most
being there was that of Nafisa’s. Nafisa, a girl less than half her age was
just a toddler barely able to walk. Her parents were both working to support
themselves a decent lifestyle in an increasingly expensive city that Bengaluru was
turning out to be, especially with respect to the real estate prices which were
always sky rocketing.
While they loved Chutki coming to
their home and playing with their daughter they were also very skeptical of Nafisa
picking up some infections in the process. Chutki was very unclean most of the
times and her parents paid very little attention to this. Nonetheless, Nafisa’s
father ensured that Chutki once at their home had her hands and feet well
washed besides being empathetic enough to ensure that Chutki’s mother while
preparing the meal for his house shared the same with Chutki. And then Chutki
and Nafisa both would have the same meal together yet sitting a little far
apart. Occasionally, Nafisa’s father was left with a remorse for asking Nafisa’s
nanny to keep his daughter a little away from Chutki or asking her to clean the
toys the latter had played with. Maybe, it was a part of growing up for a child
to get and recover from infections. Why do first time parents create such a
tantrum about it? Maybe, parenthood for the first time, brings its own set of
emotions and paranoia, especially if you are relatively economically well
disposed.
It was an ill-fated that day! It must be!
Chutki didn’t join her mother on her work that day. She stayed put with her
father who was at home because of a weekly off for him.
Leaving the apple of his eye to play
by herself outside their single room house inside the apartment’s premises he
had gone a little too far sweeping the apartment’s premises. Too far to notice
that her daughter had ventured out away from the safety
of her house’s precincts to a danger lurking by. There was a makeshift concrete
open water storage tanker beside the parking slot. Having climbed over the
concrete tanker by stepping over some smaller bricks she had been playfully dangling
her legs in the water when she lost her balance and slipped inside. The four by
four feet structure was full to its brim and the poor soul didn’t know how to
swim.
By the time he returned towards the entrance of the apartment where he had left his daughter to play, it was too late. Having found her daughter nowhere nearby, he called out her name in vain. And a desperate run to the makeshift concrete open water storage had the worst awaiting him. There as he lifted her limp less body he shrieked. As people rushed out of their apartments and neighbourhood on hearing his cries a failed cardiopulmonary resuscitation was attempted. Chutki’s pulse had given up. Forever.
It took more than a
fortnight for Chutki’s mother to resume her work. And as she entered the house
to cook the supper that evening it was difficult to behold her sight. There was
no Chutki anymore backpacked upon her mother’s back or rested upon her waist and
firmly strapped with her arm behind. That evening as Nafisa sat fidgeting over
the see-saw under the watchful eyes of her father, the latter couldn’t help
thinking about Chutki. His mind drifted pensively towards the now closed
concrete structure which had swallowed Chutki away to a different world. He
ambled towards it and stared at the closed lid over the structure with moist eyes unaware that he had left his daughter unattended near the see-saw.
A couple of minutes later
his pensive spell was broken by the crackle of his toddler daughter from behind.
He turned in panic only to find her toddler daughter firmly seated on the
see-saw with her side of the see-saw lifted to its maximum in the air. He
looked at the other end of the see-saw but there was no one seated there. He shrieked
“Nafisaaa…” and ran springing up to her to grab her down to safety. And there as
he did so he heard the familiar voice of Chutki
yet again, “Uncle, I won’t allow any harm to beset upon her. Let me play with
her. She is my best friend. And I am now always clean and tidy. As all innocent
spirits are. Uncle, please!”.
The style n manner in which you penned it is indeed very touching.. It weaves the conginitive, the emotions and compassion with flawless brilliance.. Keep it going..a pleasure to read!
ReplyDeleteSo poised with emotions....well knit storyline marvelously crafted!!!!!
ReplyDeleteNice to see you back into writing and exploring new genres, Mr. Mulshankar. It was a good read. Hope to see more of them in the coming few months.
ReplyDeleteA very touching story. I was transported to the setting you crafted. Could feel every oart of it. Well written and thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff Mr. MUSHANKAR. It was a nice read. Emotional and touching. You seem to have a keen sense of observation, touching many aspects of unspoken societal behaviours - both rural and urban. Somewhere I see the author looking through the eyes of Nafisa's father.
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